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| Author: | KimYagi [ Thu Jul 03, 2014 12:42 am ] |
| Post subject: | Feedback on my text game |
Recently met this girl who is my friend's sister and 3 years younger. Haha it's crazy but oh well. Much criticism and helpful tips would be appreciated. Thanks! 7/1, 7:11pm Me: Shut up (lame ass opener but oh well it worked and got her attention) 7/1, 7:12pm Girl: Tf ? Lol 7/1, 7:12pm Me: Ur not grounded for the whole summerr (based off her fb status of her being grounded) 7/1, 7:13pm Girl: Oh yes I am 7/1, 7:13pm Me: Haha wow. Well it was nice meeting ya 7/1, 7:14pm Girl: *****s mom showed up at my house around 2am looking for ***** (her friend) and then my parents found out I wasn't at *****s (her friend) all night. But yaaa you too. 7/1, 7:15pm Me: She was with ****** (my friend) 7/1, 7:16pm Girl: Yeeah I know that's what I told her motherr. I still got screwed 7/1, 7:16pm Me: Thats what you get for being naughty 7/1, 7:17pm Girl: Lmao yeeeah I totally deserve to be grounded all summer 7/1, 7:19pm Me: Lol have fun spending the next 2 months stuck in a house 7/1, 7:22pm Girl: 7/1, 7:23pm Me: Aw ill plan a prison break for u 7/1, 7:33pm Girl: Do itttt 7/1, 7:35pm Me: Haha ill bring a rope so u can sneak out through ur window 7/1, 7:36pm Girl: When I sneak out I just go through the back door neverr been caught 7/1, 7:37pm Me: Well u got caught last night dummyyyy 7/1, 7:37pm Girl:Not sneakin out thouuuuuhghghh And it was bc of Emmys momm 7/1, 7:38pm Me: Sneak out for me 7/1, 7:39pm Girl: Pfff I would but everyone's goin to a concert 7/1, 7:39pm Me: Yeah im going to it sooon 7/1, 7:40pm Girl: That's awesomeeeeee 7/1, 7:42pm Me: Hell yeahh 7/1, 7:53pm Me: (her name) ill let you know how crazy ****** is going to be! Try not to miss me too much 7/1, 7:55pm Girl: Lol il try 7/2 12:08am Me: ***** (some music artist) is a god 7/2 12:09am Girl: Damn you iz lucky ! 7/2 12:10am Me: Im always lucky! I wuz in the 2nd row 7/2 12:12am Girl: Whhaaaat craYyy 7/2 12:13am Me: Haha there were a lot of black chiks! You would have wuved it 7/2 12:14am Girl: Hahahah yAa black chick are my favvv Chicks** 12:19am Me: Hahaha well hiii my name is shaniqua 12:20am Girl: Hahaha rAcisttttt 12:20am Me: Im the baddest chick in town! One hunnnet! 12:23am Girl: Lmaooo 12:37am Me: Haha im just kiddin. *****s (her friend) more bout dat lYfe 12:38am Girl: Lol I guess 12:39am Me: So wtf happened last night She msged me over fb for ***** (my friend) numbrr 12:39am Girl: Soo lol 12:40am Me: Hahh im just wondering 12:40am Girl: Nun really happened at the apartment 12:40am Me: She had to apologize? 12:40am Girl: Forrr? 12:41am Me: Thats what she said this morning to me "fuckin dude, can u give me that boys number the one with the apt? some shit happened, n i needa apologize!! msg me when u get this" (copied and pasted her friend's msg to me) 12:41am Girl:Oh Her mom yelled at him lol 12:47am Me: Hahaha classssic Is her mom scarier than her? 12:52am Girl: Her mom is super chillll 12:53am Me: Damn im gonna go party with her mom then Hopefully she wont ever yell at me 12:55am Girl: I think she apologized after yelling at ****** (my friend). Idk if she apologized to him or to Emmy thougggh 12:58am Me: Ha goood! Poor ****** lol he had to goto work early that mournkmg Mourning 12:59am Girl: Ohh where does he work ? 1:00am Me: Some body shop for cars 1:00am Girl: Ohhhh sweet 1:00am Me: Sweeter than a box of chocolates 1:01am Girl: Hahahahah okay 1:02am Me: If u could be any food or candy what would u be (LOL I had nothing else good to talk about) 1:02am Girl: Whaaat 1:02am Me: Lol learn to read 1:03am Girl: Hahahaha I don't want to be a food 1:03am Me: But u have to 1:03am Girl: No I don't 1:03am Me: Say its the end of the world 1:03am Girl: Lmmao no 1:03am Me: U have to be some foox Yeah u do Dont even start this with me 1:04am Girl: Hahahaha you first Sassy 1:04am Me: I think u would be a water melon 1:04am Girl: I are sassyy 1:04am Me: Or kool aid Or kfc chicken My goddd that sounds so delicous 1:04am Girl: Lol why 1:05am Me: Thats the ordeal diet for black people (joking no offense to black people) 1:05am Girl: Oh jeezz lol 1:06am Me: U are whatchu eat nigguh 1:06am Girl: I cantttt 1:06am Me: U cant think of anything funny?? ;( 1:07am Girl: Naww my bad 1:07am Me: Pshh ur sassy and boringg 1:08am Girl: ThNk ️chuuu and goodnight (wtf? shit test?) 1:09am Me:what? im just kiddin ur fun to be around with (sounds so needy/desperate...) 1:10am Girl: Awe really that means a lot 1:10am Me: even tho im a dick to you? 1:11am Girl: Are you serious ? I don't think you're a sick to me. Are you trying to be lmao Dick** goddamnit 1:11am Me: haha hell no im just addicted to having to much fun and cant tell if i take it too far sometime too im pretty healthy too and not sick 1:12am Girl: Hahahaha Good to knowww 1:13am Me: my mile time is like 15 minutes so impressive 1:18am Girl: Oooo why u trying to impress me Going to bed night (she closed the convo) 1:24am Me: goood night! |
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| Author: | n2thevoid [ Thu Jul 03, 2014 3:47 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Feedback on my text game |
It's fine for the most part a bit lengthy and drags on. End on a high note. Other than that its fine just all that stuff, role playing, qualifying etc means nothing if you don't get the girl out. Focus on setting up a date, you've got the idle banter down and its fun but only for a time at which point you just become nice 'pen pals' A bit too jokey too, don't be afraid to switch it up to keep YOU entertained. I think you're going at the jokes a bit far sometimes it just gets obnoxious and can even become transparent you're trying to impress. Be ok switching to serious or whatever, don't always have to try and make her laugh. |
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| Author: | KimYagi [ Thu Jul 03, 2014 4:08 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Feedback on my text game |
Quote: It's fine for the most part a bit lengthy and drags on. End on a high note. Other than that its fine just all that stuff, role playing, qualifying etc means nothing if you don't get the girl out. Focus on setting up a date, you've got the idle banter down and its fun but only for a time at which point you just become nice 'pen pals'
Sir, thank you so much! I am having trouble on setting up dates because I'm afraid I'll look desperate/needy. How should I start a conversation when I'm trying to set up a meet. And also during a meet what should I be aiming at? Objectively, I want the girl to chase me but I'm clueless on when to make a move without being rejected. OH and also I have this problem a lot where either my friends or her friends are always around when we hang out so how do I form a one on one isolation with the girl when making a move?
A bit too jokey too, don't be afraid to switch it up to keep YOU entertained. I think you're going at the jokes a bit far sometimes it just gets obnoxious and can even become transparent you're trying to impress. Be ok switching to serious or whatever, don't always have to try and make her laugh. |
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| Author: | n2thevoid [ Thu Jul 03, 2014 4:35 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Feedback on my text game |
Quote: Quote: It's fine for the most part a bit lengthy and drags on. End on a high note. Other than that its fine just all that stuff, role playing, qualifying etc means nothing if you don't get the girl out. Focus on setting up a date, you've got the idle banter down and its fun but only for a time at which point you just become nice 'pen pals'
Sir, thank you so much! I am having trouble on setting up dates because I'm afraid I'll look desperate/needy. How should I start a conversation when I'm trying to set up a meet. And also during a meet what should I be aiming at? Objectively, I want the girl to chase me but I'm clueless on when to make a move without being rejected. OH and also I have this problem a lot where either my friends or her friends are always around when we hang out so how do I form a one on one isolation with the girl when making a move?A bit too jokey too, don't be afraid to switch it up to keep YOU entertained. I think you're going at the jokes a bit far sometimes it just gets obnoxious and can even become transparent you're trying to impress. Be ok switching to serious or whatever, don't always have to try and make her laugh. You got the role play stuff down, you can easily segway that into a meet. There are many opportunities to do this. You gotta be fearless with women (but ALWAYS respectful - remember if a woman respects and feels comfortable with you, she'll be far more inclined to be sexual with you too). Rejection is always a possibility but really that can be said about anything. Do you let that rejection impede you from ever advancing with a girl? Take risks, its attractive. |
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| Author: | Versalis [ Fri Jul 04, 2014 3:57 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Feedback on my text game |
I'm so calling you and asking if Shaniqua's there. |
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