It sounds good. There is no magic pickup mateiral or lines. Keep it simple and
short. The problem most guys here have is lack of experience which makes theme
scared when they need to make a move (kiss, ask for a number, sex...). The fear
will never really completelly go away but the more you do it the more easy it
becomes. You should do what you wrote. One tip: when you ask her wanna go out?
You should shut the fuck up. And not say a word. Most guys say it like this:
Wanna go out? ...well its ok if you dont, i just thought we might, but...
Thats weak. Ask and then shut up. The pressure is on her, not on you. Shes the
one that has to say no if she doesent want to. And saying no is uncomfortable.
Dont make it easy for her. The point is this: most decizions are made in the
moment. So if you just ask and then shut up that shows comfidence, stability and
no needyness on your side. All good traits, which boosts your chances.
Just keep it short and simple- that is comfident. No playing games
