| PUA Forum https://www.pick-up-artist-forum.com/ |
|
| How would you deliver this line? https://www.pick-up-artist-forum.com/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=121500 |
Page 1 of 1 |
| Author: | kneehowguys [ Thu Nov 24, 2011 4:25 pm ] |
| Post subject: | How would you deliver this line? |
How would you deliver this line? Quote:
"Excuse me, but WHAT? What do you WANT? Do you want me to just walk on BY? I mean, you're absolutely STUNNING. Do you want me to just PRETEND like that doesn't effect me? I mean, HOW? I'm just some GUY. I can't turn it off. What are you trying to DO to me, woman?" etc....
- from the shock and awe articleI read it aloud and recorded and it sounds just fucking weird to me. http://www.mediafire.com/?2re7w4z7wlk8e3n If your computer has sound recording (just search windows 7 sound recording), it is easy to record how you'd say it in less than a minute. Also looking for more lay reports using shock and awe they are so funny and awesome to read! |
|
| Author: | GoldDust [ Thu Nov 24, 2011 4:41 pm ] |
| Post subject: | |
Why would you want to use that line? In my opinion it sounds way too scripted and you'll come across weird. Maybe if you could improvise and say the same thing with your own words it would be ok I guess. Introduce pauses when you talk to build suspense |
|
| Author: | Snarg [ Thu Nov 24, 2011 5:12 pm ] |
| Post subject: | |
That is really just a terrible line. And since you didn't create it yourself, it will be very obvious when you're saying it, which is why it sounds so strange to you. I'm not saying the concept of shock and awe isn't viable, but it definitely requires a little innovation on your behalf before you can go out and use it. |
|
| Page 1 of 1 | All times are UTC |
| Powered by phpBB® Forum Software © phpBB Group http://www.phpbb.com/ |
|