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Author:  Simply_Slick [ Tue Jun 22, 2010 8:38 pm ]
Post subject:  Text game (need criticism)
last night i was gaming a co-worker over text. earlier that day i had bought her starbucks (i kno wat your thinking) at first i didnt wanna buy her but i did it all for show and made a big deal of it in front of ALL the pretty lil waitresses i work with haha and i did owe her cuz she brings me food sometimes, anyways this is how the thread went

HBBunnyRabit: Thank you for the drink. You made my night.
Me: I try ;) lol

HBBunnyRabit: Well i feel special cuz you were the one having a bad day. i hope your night was better
Me: Haha i'm not having a bad day :) but i wanted to pay you back... even though we're even you owe me haha i'll accept breakfast in the morning

HBBunnyRabit: i'm working remember? it would make more sense for you to spoil me and bring me some lol :)
Me: Wats in it for me then!? lol

HBBunnyRabit: Wat do you want?
HBBunnyRabit: tell me wat you want! (guess i took a while to reply lol)
Me: Guess ;)

HBBunnyRabit: Tell me if you could pick anything :)
Me: To hang out tonight

HBBunnyRabit: Meh i cant tonight. Some time soon. are you at home or out
Me: Just dropped all my friends off at their houses. wat r you doin?

HBBunnyRabit: oh nice. wat im doing is a secret lol. wat were you guys doin? if you did see me wat would you want to do?
Me: lol just hang out haha dont think ur gettin that lucky tonight sista ;)

HBBunnyRabit: lol. i was just wondering silly. :) buy you have a good night i need to crash out. i work at eleven right?
Me: Yup. sweet dreams. (she was workin for me)

HBBunnyRabit: cool! thanks again by the way i hope you have sweet dreams too :)
Me: oh i will lol

HBBunnyRabit: oh well i hope so hehe
Me: go catch ur beauty sleep cuz you need it! haha ;) jk

HBBunnyRabit: oh yeah i dor your right. its your fault now i'll look ugly 2marro cuz i'm four minutes past my beauty deadline
Me: well then u might as well keep textin me then haha psych i have places to go and people to see :)

HBBunnyRabit: yea right, you dont have to lie :) lol. night.




okay, that was longer than i thought it would be. but now i need critique, also where do i go from here? should i freeze out or keep gaming of wat?
Author:  klukek69 [ Wed Jun 23, 2010 12:49 am ]
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good text game, perhaps try to give her a call? and all i can say is go right for her and hang out with her as soon as you can... text game only gets you to a certain level. now all you got to do is close
Author:  Bigzy [ Wed Jun 23, 2010 11:01 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Text game (need criticism)
llast night i was gaming a co-worker over text. earlier that day i had bought her starbucks (i kno wat your thinking) at first i didnt wanna buy her but i did it all for show and made a big deal of it in front of ALL the pretty lil waitresses i work with haha and i did owe her cuz she brings me food sometimes, anyways this is how the thread went

HBBunnyRabit: Thank you for the drink. You made my night.
Me: I try ;) lol

"Instead: all gud"



HBBunnyRabit: Well i feel special cuz you were the one having a bad day. i hope your night was better
Me: Haha i'm not having a bad day :) but i wanted to pay you back... even though we're even you owe me haha i'll accept breakfast in the morning

"Nice line!"


HBBunnyRabit: i'm working remember? it would make more sense for you to spoil me and bring me some lol :)
Me: Wats in it for me then!? lol

(TEASE/Challenge HER)

Instead: how would it make more sense, you owe me...i bought u coffee and now u want breakfast too haha ur so sly!

(Change her dynamics, let her know that you dont take sh*t)



HBBunnyRabit: Wat do you want? "(shit test)"
HBBunnyRabit: tell me wat you want! ""(shit test)" (guess i took a while to reply lol)
Me: Guess ;)

(u come off sleazy especially with that smiley, try avoiding winking smileys)




HBBunnyRabit: Tell me if you could pick anything :)
Me: To hang out tonight

( At this point i think u gave her the power and possibly lost her attraction, This shows that your trying to hide your intentions, im not saying u should of said lets f*ck!, but she can see through this and knows ur intentions... try being more open but in a funny way!)

Instead: u know I would say u and me having some hot passionate sex but im not in the mood to buy u breakfast in the morning =P so i guess ill have to pass"


HBBunnyRabit: Meh i cant tonight. Some time soon. are you at home or out
Me: Just dropped all my friends off at their houses. wat r you doin?

HBBunnyRabit: oh nice. wat im doing is a secret lol. wat were you guys doin? if you did see me wat would you want to do?

(TEASE!! )

Instead: Oh so mysterious hahaha, i bet your eating ice cream and watching latenight tv in your jammies =P

Me: lol just hang out haha dont think ur gettin that lucky tonight sista

(U Gained some power)

Personally i would of made it more interesting, "ahh u know this and that, egging houses the usual" the rest was good tho"



HBBunnyRabit: lol. i was just wondering silly. :) buy you have a good night i need to crash out. i work at eleven right?
Me: Yup. sweet dreams. (she was workin for me)

HBBunnyRabit: cool! thanks again by the way i hope you have sweet dreams too :)
Me: oh i will lol

HBBunnyRabit: oh well i hope so hehe
Me: go catch ur beauty sleep cuz you need it! haha ;) jk"

(awesome line man!)


HBBunnyRabit: oh yeah i dor your right. its your fault now i'll look ugly 2marro cuz i'm four minutes past my beauty deadline

Me: well then u might as well keep textin me then haha psych i have places to go and people to see :) "

(good but needed to be more subtle, i wouldnt suggested her to keep talking to you, i would of ended the texting before her After she said Its your fault blah blah blah)

Instead: Go to sleep already and quit messaging me lol (dont give her value)



All up man, i think u did good but you gave this chick too much value and too much power, just think a pick up artist gets good at picking up, therefore hes not afraid to lose a girl or be cocky/funny or even neg her, because if she doesnt like it he can just get another one! There a plenty of GIRLS man!

Your the one in charge, your the man...and you have the right to be because u are freakin awesome!

U did well though man! just a few bits here and there but u did ok, the more you do it the more ull progress...anyways thats my opinion and i might not be right in some cases...sorry if i come off harsh man, im just giving you my view
Author:  Simply_Slick [ Wed Jun 23, 2010 2:13 pm ]
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Good shit man! Wasn't harsh at all! Thats exactly wat i needed, Thanks Bigzy. I guess my problem is that i dont want to come off arrogant but i dont wanna land myself in the LJBF zone you know?
Author:  jazestix [ Wed Jun 23, 2010 2:24 pm ]
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Quote:
Good shit man! Wasn't harsh at all! Thats exactly wat i needed, Thanks Bigzy. I guess my problem is that i dont want to come off arrogant but i dont wanna land myself in the LJBF zone you know?
bigzy had it right. i may have used different lines, but his concept was right. gave too her too much value. i use an app called AIRG on my phone, and i've met a few girls from there. but i mainly use it for practicing lines and fine tuning my cocky funny. i almost can always get a number pretty quickly (ppl seem more willing to give #s out to strangers compared to 10 years ago, i've noticed.)

but style mentioned something in The Game that i've learned by using chatrooms since damn near the advent of commercial internet use. he was referring to personal ads, but i've noticed the same applies for online chat, or full or semi-anonymous online social networks, and even through text. which is:

be cocky/funny (almost a prick-the word style uses). and when u meet them in person, be completely charming. iono...food for thought i guess.

ur convo seemed decent, but u seemed to be jumping through a lot of her hoops. her frame was a little stronger than urs. throw in some CF and punish now and then (refer to bigzy above). good luck, mang!
Author:  Bigzy [ Thu Jun 24, 2010 2:44 pm ]
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Quote:
Good shit man! Wasn't harsh at all! Thats exactly wat i needed, Thanks Bigzy. I guess my problem is that i dont want to come off arrogant but i dont wanna land myself in the LJBF zone you know?
Glad i could help man...u did do well tho! U just gotta put more love in yourself, if your in the ljbf...who cares..its a lesson learnt...onto the next one =) thats what this games all about...learning how to talk to women and seduce women...reading is only half of it, the other half is learnt through trial and error...=)

(she should be worried that you'll put her in the ljbf zone)
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