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Author:  Lokey [ Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:21 pm ]
Post subject:  I need some got analisys of this

Since im a newbie i need somebody to look at our convo over myspace messages. It was through the messenger so its suckeds cause it was like sending email. But let me know where i went wrong or what i should have done differently. Btw this is a girl i met in one of my classes. She is about a HB8 with a good personality.

Me-me and jason and some friends are going out thursday night. and i wanted to tell u that u were going with us. U told me telepathically. lookin foward to it! see ya then.

HB8- ok, jean gray. could you telepathically tell me where we are going and when? I don't get out of class until 3:20 on Thursday.

me-i tried to send it through magnetic waves but i guess your many piercings deflected the signal. lol, we won't go out till later. like to the bars and stuff. you will have fun. nobody can hang out with us and not have fun. 10'ish

HB8- 10'ish jesus christ what am I suppose to do until then. besides, I can't stay out extremely late drinking;how in the hell would I make it back home to somerset. You might want to remagnetize this idea back to me on a more realistic note :).

me-i guess you dont want to hang out with us....i guess i was wrong....we might be able to hang out after ur classes. and if i like u then i might let you buy me a drink. but u have to be extra good.

HB8-lol. no, I want to hang out with you guys but I don't want to die on my way back home either on I75. I don't drink and drive. shit, if I am good you will let me buy you the drink. who is the lady here?

me-i dont drink, so a water with lemon was my drink of choice, but i never said we couldnt have a good time with out drinking.go out with us thursday night. if u dont drink then u can still go home in one piece! worst case senereo then we can crash at jasons for the night. i'll be sad if u dont go....:'(

HB8-i never said i wasn't going; i want to go. I just had a problem if we were drinking out real late because i would have to drive home. who all is going anyway? and where will we met and at what time?

me-do u have aim? im tired of talking on here....very premitive...

HB8-what do you mean? you still haven't answered my previous questions.

me-i mean do u have aol messenger? its hard to talk on here. we can discuss the plans later. we could meet up earlier. Me and jason are def going. havent talked to anybody else yet. we can meet after ur classes and go for dinner or something where u buy me a drink!

HB8- no, i don't have aol messenger but i have myspace instant messenger. we can just figure out everything wednesday though in class

me-sounds good. we should just hang out at jasons appartment. i havent talked to him about it yet but we could find some fun things to do in richmond. i'll prolly end up crashing there because i dont have friday classes. but i would hate to keep you up past ur bed time. i can tell ur a light weight!

hb8- haha. if you only when the things I have done in my life you probably wouldn't say I was a light weight.

me-
im good at reading people. i bet u act like ur a freak. but i bet ur really a good girl inside. i can tell. whats ur bedtime? 930?

HB8-i don't think I act like a freak. do you think i act like a freak? i just know that i can be pretty conniving and believe in brutal honesty. I think that generally I like to do good; it just doesn't always turn out that way. My brothers would tell you that I was the black sheep, not them. They know what I am capable of. what about my bedtime? 930, jesus you must take me for a holy child. haha

me- i dont think ur a freak. well maybe. but it makes u cool. i like freaks ;) freaks make things fun!

BLAH BLAH..FLUFF FLUFF..SCHOOL...SCHOOL...

me-lol im sure i'll be in the same boat...we can let loose on thursday. we will have deserved it! maybe i'll buy u a drink ;)

Hb8 there you go; now we are talking

me-u better enjoy it..i normally dont buy ladies drinks ;)

hb8-you are a riot. i bet you do all the time.

Me- acually i dont. i dont feel i need to. i dont buy affection. but i can make exceptions for some people :)

me -8** 5** 2*** message me tonight

hb8- already then. don't you mean call you?

i have to work so i cant talk. but i can message :)

Me-i have to work so i cant talk. but i can message :)

hb8- dude i live in the stone age; i don't have cell phone sorry

me- do u have electricity? what about a telegraph machine? because i can learn morse code if i have to....

Thats it. I know my game is weak...but thats why him here. U dont have to critique everything but i would like pointer on some of my major mess ups. Thanks
-Lokey

Author:  Persuasive [ Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:42 pm ]
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I'm a newb too with this. It's been a good year since I've signed up on myspace, and I've only hooked up with one girl. I msg'd her that I liked her song and it picked up from there.

So a pro response would definitely help.

Author:  Lokey [ Wed Apr 11, 2007 5:33 pm ]
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ok i have some updates. The next time i saw her in class she was dressed nicer. hair was all done and stuff. but still wanted to play hard to get. she sat down in a seat and i sat down with one seat between us. She was like why are u sitting over there. so i sat beside her. um we talked during class. she laughed at everything i said. Even the not funny stuff. I played the guess the number game. Didnt get it right. but i have one confusion. I thought it was time to introduce kino so i asked her can i see your hand? I want to write something. She looked at me funny and said y. I repeaded that i want to write something. She didnt want me to write on her hand. I was a little lost for words cause i didnt think she would say no. But i busted her balls about it and stuff. But she got a piece of paper. I wrote something to remind her about something in our previous convo. She was still laughing and stuff. Class was over and i said bye. i figured that i wouldnt message her for a couple of days to let her chase me. I pushed her earlier, then pulled a lot. now im gonna let her pull some more before i procede. We have plans on thursday like a movie and stuff. I plan on kiss closing by the end of the night. But why do you think she showed resistince when i asked to see her hand?

Author:  Persuasive [ Wed Apr 11, 2007 6:28 pm ]
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Looks like she was pulling, playing cat and mouse with you. Definitely some IOIs there. Looks like you're on your way. :D

Author:  Lokey [ Thu Apr 12, 2007 3:45 am ]
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yeah i got that two. But the big thing will be when we hang out. She's mine for the taking.

Author:  Slipfinger [ Thu Apr 12, 2007 7:50 am ]
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there are some signs in the convo but at some places I found you needy rather then funny, and thats the problem with messengers of any kind, no facial expressions, no body language and the stuff that would have seem like alfa in real life, seemed to be needi and wierd, like your buy me a drink line..then when she said she was'nt going to drink and drive, haha yould've said, well if your nice ill let you sleep in my closet, stop mentioning Jason..dont get her thinking shes going out with the two of you...your the important one, here your the fun guy....but overall it was fresh and a good way to internet game.

B

Author:  Lokey [ Thu Apr 12, 2007 2:16 pm ]
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yeah thats why i hate email so much. but thanks for the help. I'll change some things up next time! I agree with everything u said.

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