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Author:  masterPUA [ Wed Oct 17, 2007 2:27 am ]
Post subject:  practiced an opener , need critiquing

today, at a volleyball game, i said to myself, im gonna go open. only problem was football practice started in 5 minutes so i had a real time constraint. btw, my goal wasnt a #close, just a good opening. their team was sitting in all different places on our bleachers, i walk right in front of them, pick the prettiest girl, sit a row in front of her and a seat to the side. she is the target.

PUA - you all varsity?
target - yep
PUA - you guys are gonna have a tough time today, our varsity is pretty good.
girl 2 - i heard, but our shcool beat your football team bad
PUA - that might be true...(interupted)
girl 3 - yea, but you guys dont have enough players for jv right? so there are lots of sophomores on varsity?
PUA - (she did my job for me) exactly
PUA - so how'd your school's homecoming go?
target - oh it was so much fun!
girl 3 - yeah it was a blast.
Coach - (lol... anyways coach comes up to us, turns to me and says) Some girl's lookin for you.
PUA - oh yeah? and who might that girl be?
Coach - the girl in the yellow sweater. she told me to tell her if i saw any hot guys
PUA - hahaha (group laughs) well thank you. (after a while of watching the coach call for the girl i say) well, i have to football now, it was nice talking to you all.


at first, the target looked like "uhh.... what is this random guy doing?..." but after the homecoming question, it was like her bitch shield was never there. so how do you think i did? questions? comments? concerns?

Author:  Lashram01 [ Wed Oct 17, 2007 8:19 pm ]
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not bad, look at the plainness of it and you should see wher you can improve. . . there was no routine, no real attention grabber, no hook, no negging. Just a shoot the shiit convo, nothing for her to remember you by.

You should start out by talking to her friends more right in front of her, tell a funny little story get them laughing etc, the target will wonder why you arent zoning in on her right away since she;s the hottest and this usually happens. . . it will have her craving yer attention. make her wait for it and want it then give it to her slowly. . . learn cat string theory.

Heres a good little neg story for high scool. . .
I told a HB's how her high school spray painted our high school cause our football team beat theirs . . . negged her about it etc etc.

Author:  fortunehooks [ Wed Oct 17, 2007 9:09 pm ]
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You did an admirable job because you only wanted to test, and wasn't even sarging although you did notice a nice-looking female. You got social proof from the coach, and that's was the time to become a little bit cocky and funny. Like take that hot guys comment, and make it singluar. What, I'm the hottest guy and she should be in a rush to meet me, just ask all these girls they love me.

Author:  masterPUA [ Thu Oct 18, 2007 4:33 am ]
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thanks for posting

Author:  Sugar Shay [ Thu Oct 18, 2007 5:00 pm ]
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the coach definately provided you with social proof an DHV.. i believe he provided a potential platform for a # close if u had more time.. making it obvious that you are desired by girls :)

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