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| Author: | brownman [ Tue Apr 29, 2008 2:37 pm ] |
| Post subject: | nice |
sounds good...tell us how it works out |
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| Author: | Mr. Amador [ Tue Apr 29, 2008 3:31 pm ] |
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Its all about delivery...cause it can easly get insulting...so be careful when field-testing it. |
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| Author: | Chosen [ Tue Apr 29, 2008 6:59 pm ] |
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I like your originality. But I think using the word "goddess" is gonna telegraph a lot interest and could lower your value. I do like the neg, and the push and pull is there. Also there is no time constraint, which is easy to fix. For example "That's Amazing! I gotta get back to my friends, but I had to stop and tell you that I saw a sculpture ..." just an example. Good Job Bro, and let me know if you test this and how it works out for you. ~Chosen |
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| Author: | Bluemoon21 [ Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:48 pm ] |
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Haha that's sick! Nice subtle neg there. BBSx |
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| Author: | Spiel [ Sun May 04, 2008 8:20 am ] |
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I think you need a stronger DQ. The word goddess, for a start, is hitting her with an IOI, as is asking her name. Remember, don't start giving IOIs until you start receiving them. having said that, this is an opener that has a lot of potential. so kudos! |
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| Author: | dots [ Tue May 06, 2008 11:48 pm ] |
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hahahhhaha definitely going to field it |
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