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| Author: | ashcorbin [ Tue Nov 09, 2010 3:54 pm ] |
| Post subject: | am I on the right track? |
I Just updated all of my profile on Okcupid. Tell me if Im on the right track, when I wrote it I thought I was but now im not sure http://www.okcupid.com/profile/drunkpunklove |
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| Author: | The Web Womanizer [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 6:26 am ] |
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Your profile is interesting to say the least. I actually like parts of it. It's like you are telling a story (in fact, you are) instead of just doing the same old stuff. I saw you posted this on LoveSystems too, where that one coach gave you advice. I don't agree with everything he says, but your profile doesn't look that bad. The PUA routines in it might be a little out of place at times though. I personally think your weakest link is your pictures. I believe to be a successful online dater you have to have a trifecta of good pictures, solidly written profile, and a good initial email (and follow ups). You could have SIGNIFICANTLY better pictures than you have. You are a big guy, so modeling is probably out of the question (maybe not), but you should find someone who is into photography who can take good pictures of you. Trust me, your results will be like night and day. Look at how tight me OkCupid Profile is: http://www.okcupid.com/profile/JustinRomeo4u/ |
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| Author: | Mig [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 2:19 pm ] |
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I think the profile is too long, far too long in fact. Keep the interesting stories but trim it WAY down. And limit yourself to 3 photos. |
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| Author: | ashcorbin [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 3:39 pm ] |
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Hey thanks Web womanizer I see what you mean about the pictures..... yours are so much more artistic and interesting than mine. Ill try and track down someone who can do that for me, I think I know some people at the very least I know a studio I could go to. any thing else I need to work on, you said most of it was good but the routines were out of place, I was actually thinking about deleting them all together. |
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| Author: | ashcorbin [ Wed Nov 10, 2010 3:41 pm ] |
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oh and Mig Ill keep the length and pictures in mind as well thanks |
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| Author: | The Web Womanizer [ Thu Nov 11, 2010 4:14 am ] |
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It's good to write your profile in an interesting way, like a story. But like has been said, length my be an issue, and routines are creepy online (and I would argue in person many times as well). |
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| Author: | ashcorbin [ Thu Nov 11, 2010 3:39 pm ] |
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which Routines are you talking about, were there more than one? The only one i had intentionally put in the profile was the best friend test |
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| Author: | karlracki [ Fri Nov 12, 2010 12:44 am ] |
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Personally, I think you need a different picture. |
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