You're on the right track I just think you need to leave the humor in there but use it sparingly. Show more than just the joker side of you.
PS. Your sister is cute. U might have to protect her from me
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| Author: | zazazaza [ Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:15 pm ] |
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http://www.okcupid.com/profile/OneOfAKind309 What do you guys think? Most girls have said they love the humor in it and that they assumed I'm a funny guy because of the profile. Although there are a couple other girls who have been turned off by it. Any improvements you guys can think of?[/url] |
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| Author: | zazazaza [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 4:42 pm ] |
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Bump |
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| Author: | zazazaza [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 7:23 pm ] |
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Final bump :/ |
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| Author: | liv4therisk [ Wed Aug 11, 2010 3:15 pm ] |
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You're on the right track I just think you need to leave the humor in there but use it sparingly. Show more than just the joker side of you. PS. Your sister is cute. U might have to protect her from me .
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| Author: | coloredfusion [ Wed Aug 11, 2010 9:15 pm ] |
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OK dude just checked you out. Most of the cockiness/humour only translates in real life unfortunately. So trust me, I like the looking for a sugar mommy stuff but keep that for the actual date! Also, take the second picture out and take out in the description of the girl being your sister. Just don't put anything at all. This is coming from one of the very few who has been able to actually land dates online. My profile nick is dreamsound2 |
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| Author: | zazazaza [ Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:18 am ] |
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Thanks for the suggestions, so I think what I'm hearing is create a more serious self-summary and inject a little bit of humor here and there as opposed to the other way around? |
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| Author: | liv4therisk [ Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:53 pm ] |
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Really awesome pics dreamsound2. I like it. |
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| Author: | zazazaza [ Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:54 pm ] |
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I'll second that, you must have a friend whose into photography? |
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| Author: | CharlieKelly [ Sat Aug 14, 2010 4:30 am ] |
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whats OKCupid? |
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| Author: | Braddock715 [ Sat Aug 14, 2010 7:42 pm ] |
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its alright. work on it |
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| Author: | skypirate35 [ Sat Aug 21, 2010 1:23 pm ] |
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I borrowed your about me and tried it out on POF. by itself that is major WIN! writing a post about that. |
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