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Author:  Monkeh87 [ Thu Apr 04, 2013 5:31 pm ]
Post subject:  Yep, another profile critique!

I've recently become single and thought I'd get back on POF as this is where I met my last girlfriend of 2 years. However I seem to be having mixed results and think it may be down to my profile which I know isn't perfect.

Here is a link to my profile: http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=50818011

Is it me or have girls become more stuck up online? I mean I've been told I'm a good looking guy and a HB8.5 I was seeing once said "you could literally have any girl you wanted" but I'm finding it difficult to even get positive interactions from the most average looking girls who would normally be easy game in real life. I'm only using on-line dating as a supplement to my real world game but it would be nice if it yielded some more results.

So yeah what do you guys think of my profile?

Author:  Profile Diva [ Mon Apr 08, 2013 6:45 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Yep, another profile critique!

Hey Monkeh87,

I think you have a pretty good profile. Pics are good and show different side to you, and it's not too long and wordy. Could be a little more specific in what you're looking for in a woman. Remember - what you put out there determines what you attract. Don't be afraid to be specific. It may cut down on quantity of responses by will improve the quality.

Also, I love the first date line but I'd change it to..."We'd rob a bank together and then flee the country to our own private tropical island where I would become YOUR slave."

THAT will attract women - and make them laugh!

Check out my 5 Free Tips to writing an online dating profile at www.profilediva.net.

Cheers and good luck!

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