This is my profile on one of the Hungarian dating sites. It's for youngsters, mostly. Not too many geeky girls, sadly, but whatever, it's something I wanna try. It has separate sections about your tastes, sexual preferences, etc, so I didn't include most of this in my "Introduction" which is the main part of your profile where you can write about yourself whatever you want. So, here it is, rate it. I wrote it with some PUA guides in mind, but I have a feeling that it sucks ass.
My username in English means male/stud penguin, I think it's funny because penguins aren't very studly creatures.
There is a "motto" section. I put up a funny oneliner there, a joke version of the "Don't look the gift horse in the mouth", which is turned into "Don't look at the oars of a gift boat" by a pun. It works in Hungarian, I swear
Any better suggestions? My introduction, translated to English:
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This is the profile of Beetle, leave a message after the beep!
I'm looking for girls with humor, brains and confidence. (It's even better if she's using them all regularly!)
If your pep is like of a tailless goldfish, it's not gonna work.
I'm only awaiting the messages of cheerful, direct girls, with plenty of impishness [in Hungarian, it's a slang for sexual playfulness] in them
Yeah, I'm picky, but why not? Like many others, I deserve a cool mate!
Beep...
Tell me what you think, critique the shit out of this profile. Thanks!
I'm looking for girls with humor, brains and confidence. (It's even better if she's using them all regularly!)
If your pep is like of a tailless goldfish, it's not gonna work.
I'm only awaiting the messages of cheerful, direct girls, with plenty of impishness [in Hungarian, it's a slang for sexual playfulness] in them
Yeah, I'm picky, but why not? Like many others, I deserve a cool mate!
Beep...