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| Author: | RelentlessSolace [ Tue Dec 13, 2011 1:35 am ] |
| Post subject: | POF openers, take a look at these and tell me what ya think. |
Ok I already know it's a little too dam long, yet please give me some good feedback. Some guy here was saying I need to cut the teasing crap and just be straight up, I sort of understand this but not fully. Your help is greatly appreciated! "You said everyone loves you, yet I am not sure if I like you yet, for one; I noticed you don't even have a car. I guess that just means you will have to hitch a ride with a taxi/bus when you meet up with me! =) That would be a funny way to pull up on a first date lol, on the other hand in big cities like New York, people must do that all the time.. Since you live in the city and enjoy bball then you must follow the Golden State Warriors? If not that would be a big shame.. Hit me up sometime so we can get to know each other. Have a good one,********" She said she likes bball so I asked her if she liked the warriors, this is where the guy told me I screwed up since it made her qualify me. I kinda f*cked up since she actually has a car, but it got a reaction out of her, though a negative one be at that. Please give me some pointers or any good links that may be of some help to me. I just put a hella lot of effort into making a dozen or so messages to some good looking girls and they all went along the lines of the following. "I love the outdoors for the activities but in particular I like doing things to keep me active, how about you, what sort of sports do you do the most to help you stay in shape? I also noticed you’re an aspiring vet, that’s cool and all until I saw the cat in your photo. I have a tiff with them, considering they always end up making my allergies go through the roof! =) You should hit me up sometime so we can chit and chat with one another. Have a good one," |
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| Author: | sh0gun0ftheast [ Tue Dec 13, 2011 2:49 am ] |
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It wasn't terrible. I would pay more attention to what they wrote on their profiles, otherwise you'll get called out on it. For openers keep them short and to the point. Write your own openers on the spot. Don't Nuke it! lol Example: Code: (main picture of hb9 is of her biting her finger)
"I hope you washed your hands before you put that finger in your mouth. :)"
Code: There is absolutely nothing I can really tease you about on your profile! So I guess you win for now. In all honesty, you just have a very care free/down to earth look about you.
You've got to admit this is a lot better than the 300 hey's, how are you? and hey sexy's that you get daily.
I do have to ask though. What are you top 5 places that you would love to travel to? :)
This one loved to travel. A shared passion. Also, you kind of indirectly showed your intent with "meet me" and the date part. Even though this is an online dating site, you still have to play the game. Remember to branch off from the opener as well. |
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| Author: | RelentlessSolace [ Wed Dec 14, 2011 12:51 am ] |
| Post subject: | cool |
So basically make it less personal and make them qualify themselves? |
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| Author: | papichulo818 [ Wed Dec 14, 2011 1:42 am ] |
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The guy who told you you messed up for getting her to qualify you is a retard. You want to have her qualifying you, you did good work. |
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