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| Author: | DevonW [ Tue Nov 27, 2007 3:07 am ] |
| Post subject: | Msn # close- Critique please |
Hey guys, I know this girl Chantyl from school, I got "The Game" on saturday and have been reading it non stop and kinda wanted to try this on msn tonight cause I was sick today at school so didnt get a chance in real life. Anyways I ended getting 3 girls numbers over msn that I know from school and work tonight, ones really more of a friend and another wasnt done as well but heres Chantyls. I'd love a critique Devon: Heeeey Chantyl Chantyl: heey Devon: Whats up? Chantyl: Nothing really Devon: wow that sounds boring Chantyl: hahaha Chantyl: thanks... Devon: I bet you wouldnt be bored if we were doing something Chantyl: lol Chantyl: probably nt Chantyl: but I am doing something Chantyl: its jsut not fun Devon: oooh, and what is that lol, tell me before I go to give volunteer service Chantyl: lmao Chantyl: tagging photos of me on facebook Devon: Thats boring? I love seeing pictures of me Chantyl: lmao Chantyl: i bet you doo!!! Devon: I just realized. I dont have any pictures of you and me! :-O Chantyl: lmao Chantyl: well we have to get on that Devon: well bring in a camera tomorrow and we will Chantyl: haha ok! Devon: well ive gotta go, all that library volunteering service is tough Chantyl: hahaha Chantyl: probably Chantyl: kk have funn!! Chantyl: be good Devon: lol I'm always good in the library Chantyl: cell? Devon: sure :p that works lol Chantyl: well Chantyl: XXX-XXXX Chantyl: XX^ (wrote wrong number) Devon: lol you should learn to count , cya Chantyl Chantyl: lmao Chantyl: thanks Chantyl: kk peace boy and that was it. I kinda tried using a few things, to get her number used MM, the neg was out of place but at the end with the wrong number, used an FTC cause I was running out of stuff to talk about, and tried to DHV with the library volunteer service lol. Any ideas on how to improve or comments? Gladly appreciated Thanks in advance, Devon |
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| Author: | JSmooth [ Wed Nov 28, 2007 1:17 pm ] |
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Looks like a good example. You had some cocky/funny comments in there. You stayed away from AFC comments, and demonstrated higher value. You even # closed her, so it's obvious you have the rapport built with her. The only thing I suggest is this, when you get a phone number in the field, on msn, or whatever. That you spend a few more minutes afterwards to comfort build so she doesn't feel weird. Based on what you posted it looks like you talked for 3 minutes, got her number, and bailed. If you don't comfort build afterwords she may get some Buyer's remorse. Overall good job, |
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