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| Author: | *olie* [ Sat Mar 22, 2008 8:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | SHOW ME YOUR VALUE!! |
im bored so heres a nice little thing for you, tell me a story of you showing higher value it can be as long as oyu want but ive gotta stay intrested and it can be as made up as you want but ive gotta belive it basicly do whatever and ill comment on how good it is in my oppinion and w.e have fun, heres mine so the other day i walked up to my friend and some guy that was like 8 foot tall came over looking completly out of it smacked one of my friends strait in the temple and everyone was really shocked and he looked like he was gonna lunge at another one of my friends so i rugby tackled him then i woke my unconsious friend and there we are with a huge guy on the floor my friend really pale and some really hot girl walks over and says hey did you just hit that guy??? and i said yeah he just hit my friend and then we got into this huge argument i ended up winning and she randomly gave me her number and left. im thinking why did she give me her number and i call her the next day and she says she wants to meet up and we achelly have a good time out and i took her back to my house and ended up sleeping with her! |
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| Author: | Waffle [ Sun Mar 23, 2008 2:47 am ] |
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Okay...as for being a pick up artist, I'm new, but how to tell a story with ink or words, I know. You need to flush out the intensity more with a story like that. C'mon 8' tall. This could basically be another David and Goliath! Use some emotion in the story. Plus its so short that it really won't catch any attention. Be more creative...after all, that's what being a PUA is all about. |
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| Author: | 96Firebird [ Sun Mar 23, 2008 6:26 am ] |
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Do you plan on breathing at all during this story? The first five lines are one long run-on sentance, I think I'd pass out after the third line. And dude, passing out won't get you any numbers... Haha but really... Made up stories are pathetic in my mind. Now if you played it off as a joke at the end, I can see that as a good story. Something like, "So how much of that did you believe? And don't tell me the whole thing or I'm walking." |
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| Author: | Durus [ Sun Mar 23, 2008 8:28 am ] |
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Why am I wearing a bullet on my necklace? haha, no... I don't think I'm some kind of gangster or anything... um... I don't really like to talk about it all that much, but I guess I can give you the synopsis if you really want to know... I mean, you DID buy me this drink and all..... It's actually a .38 special round and I got shot in the back twice with the same type of bullet while I was in the Coast Guard. We boarded a pretty big tanker just north of Cuba. Officially we were doing a "safety check" but it's pretty much well known that we were really looking for drugs. We rounded up what we THOUGHT was the whole crew up on deck and started to do our searches. I was an engineer so it was my job, along with another guy, to check down in the engine room and all the other engineering spaces... long story short, there was a guy hiding down there and we apparently got a little too close to where they had the cocaine stashed... he figured if he was going down then he mind as well take someone with him so he started opening fire on us and caught me twice in the back. It was pretty touch and go there for a while since I had to be airlifted to land before I could see a real doctor, but I made it out okay.... anyway, I wear this necklace to remind me that life is precious and can be taken away from you at any time, so you should enjoy every moment and always live like it's your last day on earth. ...sure, you can see the scars... lift up my shirt in the back... |
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