From what I can hear in the first clip it sounds to me like your voice may be seriously damaged, which in all likelihood is caused by your 'wrecked diaphraghm'.
I'm no expert or anything but I have just graduated with a degree in Drama and there are a number of extremely important factors about your voice that every person should know. I am actually seriously considering making a how-to guide on using your voice properly.
First things first, as I haven't written this guide yet I can recommend that you first get a proper medical opinion on your voice, and I'm not talking about a simple general practitioner. Get an expert on the voice and throat to take a close look and be willing to pay a big sum for that. If you do not, you may find your voice irreparably damaged very near to the future.
The voice is an actor's most important tool and you wouldn't believe the extent they go to to make sure it is looked after. If you do want an introduction into voice training, the forerunner and expert on this topic is Cicely Berry. She's well known in the acting community and you'd do good to read her books. I can recommend starting with "Freeing the Natural Voice."
PS: No offense to Skylar, but simply drinking water is not going to change your voice permanently
Thanks so much for your response man. I appreciate your help. I had a muscle disease when I was 16 and it weakened every part of my body. My diaphragm was weakened too - I'd say. So I'm conpletely better now, and I got my voice looked at a professional - she told me I'm tightening my vital chords - making me speak from my throat as if I'm choking or running low on breath. She gave me some techniques, i dont do them A LOT but i do them - i think they help a little. That's my understanding of it. I don't really hv the money to buy books and all that so online stuff would be better. According to the lady my voice can get better... I guess?
What bothers me is no one takes me serious and I lose their attention fast or I appear weak. (IMPORTANT) do you guys think it's bad or girls won't like it? Cause it's high and it gets lost in the SPAM. If you know a deff way to fix it let me know.
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