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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2015 1:37 am 
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I go by Royal, and I am 21 years old. I make videos on my spare time and one day I will have 300,000 views. 8)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6fcvmCKUr8c


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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2015 2:30 am 
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What is your question?

There's nothing new here. Self-limiting beliefs are fairly covered in this community.

Trying to make money from inspirational videos? I don't get it. Seriously, I'm not trying to be a dick either - I don't understand why you created this thread.

Maybe I'm missing it and I apologize if that's the case.

His name is Stephen Hawking BTW (not Hawkins) and I'm pretty sure he isn't deaf.


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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2015 5:07 am 
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I want feedback on my video that's about it. Things that I can do to improve the quality of my message for future videos. You can be a dick, but I want some legit feedback.


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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2015 12:20 pm 
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All right then.

Well I sorta gave you some, but to be clear: The message you are conveying is nothing that doesn't exist in a thousand other YouTube videos. It's not original, and you don't have the reputation to really come off as being knowledgeable (I mean, not to say you're not... but the same videos have been posted by people with hundreds of thousands of subscribers... or people with psychology degrees, or pickup coaches, or actual motivational speakers who do it for a living).

When they talk, people listen.

Within the first minute of the video you also state a very famous person's name incorrectly, and your facts are wrong... Doesn't exactly increase your credibility.


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PostPosted: Thu May 28, 2015 6:13 pm 
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nothing really fresh, pep talk like many others...

any advice?

keep goin! but try to go deeper! try to profound something uniq, something special, something more profound what was never ever before told! thats the key!

big up!


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 15, 2015 1:12 am 
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I appreciate the motivation.

What is the backround of that video, is it painted ont he wall? it doesnt look like a gym because of the heater/ac vent


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