I wanted to thank everyone for the help they have been giving, especially Eddiefews and Jackzero.
I am a pretty accomplished poet and found it works wonder (only when the girl is already interested in you! I have written for both girls who were interested and those who weren't, and even though the quality was the same, the reaction is much different when the girl isn't into you. Be careful!)
If you guys have any poems/letters you are planning to send to girls, post them here and I will be willing to edit them before. And remember, the number one rule of poetry is emotion comes first.