I feel really crap now because I used the material correctly but apparently there is context I am missing.
Luckily for me it seems as if I am cruising by on my looks as she just replied and she seems really interested
Thanks again for sharing your knowledge.
These things aren't formulas. You sometimes will succeed because of the method used, sometimes you will succeed in spite of the method used. At the end of the day, you could've drawn a smiley and your number and she may have called based on your description. I personally would've just left off the second sentence.
Mystery Method for demonstrating active disininterest. This situation was an expression of interest. So the MM techniques aren't applicable here (A1, A2, whatever I forget because people haven't used that terminology on these forums for years now).
Adam Lyons has a direct approach for situations like this -- something like saw you and had to come talk to you, but I'm leaving contact me. Look it up - it would be more fitting than MM in this situation
Keep us updated and lets see if we can get this right. Clearly you just have to not screw up at this point.