First off, what is so classy about a 24yo average looking girl that has 3 kids? Second, you totally came off as needy! Lets emphasize that for effect..."NEEDY"!
This opener has been tested and approved by a few, but i have had little luck with it in my age demigraphic. I see it as a decent open, but the 2nd response it weak. IMO it breaks down like this: "I hope you can take a joke" = I'm insecure and backtracking; "I thought you were adorable" = I just gave you more value than you deserve; "I just had to say hi" = I now seek your acceptance.
I have found that an opener that come accross as playful is better suited for online openers. I personally had the most success with "Serious question...You can only choose one, no cheating! M&M's, Skittles, or Strawberries" which is part of the apocolypse or strawberry fields opener! I do not follow the rest of the script after the opener, I usually tease them about their response, and then play on their profile. EX:
Me: Serious question...You can only choose one, no cheating! M&M's, Skittles, or Strawberries?
HB 8: M&M's~ sry if wrong but it just sounds rite!
Me: M&M's...Yep you fell for my trick! Dork!
HB 8: Very funny! And, yep. Im a dork, all day every day~
Me: Don't worry, your secret is safe with me. I'm posting it on Twitter now...lol
HB 8: Ha ha, go for it! I'm not skeeeered~ How was your day?
Me: I can see you have a good sense of humor little Cancer girl...+1.
The sun shined so was a good day!
HB 8: Everyday is a good day, if ya want it to be! I can be silly, yep
Me: Serious question...You can only pick one, no cheating! M&M's, Skittles, or Strawberries?
HB 7: Strawberries easily. I'm not much of a candy or chocolate person but love strawberries.
Your profile is hilarious I love it!
Me: Thanks! I do all my own work! It is good that you have a sense of humor! +1.
HB 7: Humor is huge! If you can't laugh what else is there?
Me: True story Cancer girl...Nice Parrot by the way! LOL
HB 7: Lol cancer girl. Yeah that's me. That's my friends McCaw Maui
I'm Crypto by the way
HB 7: Jenessa
Me: Nice to meet you Jenesia. Love, love your name? What is that Turkish or something? :p
HB 7: LMAO! It's made up no meaning not sure of the origin. Thanks
Hope this helps a little