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beyondevil
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 Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 1:45 am Post subject: Improved DHV Story |
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This is my first DHV Story, have never tested it yet please let me know what you think.
Hey that reminds me, over the break I went to Ujung Kulon a protected national reserve in Indonesia. My old high school paid for my girlfriend.. well my ex now and I to accompany them on a trip, be both are master divers so I thought it would be a great chance to explore some untouched waters. Anyways while we were there we helped the kids set up tent by a cliff just overlooking the sea. We decided to walk around for a bit. The island is home to the very rare Javenese rhino, you’re probably not going to believe this but we found one and it was just steps away from us. Anyways, I knew that Jane would freak out, so I had to remain as calm as possible which was hard cause I to be honest was pretty scared. She was behind me and I tell her to walk towards a small cave we passed by, she complies. Now its me and the Rhino. I slowly start to walk towards Jane the rhino’s eyes were locked on to me. So I spotted a tree, climbed and just waited for the beast to get bored.
My ex is a total nymphomaniac, I mean this girl wants it all the time. I am not complaining its just the way it was. She told me she wanted me right there and then. I wont go into the details but if you think make up sex is good , try life saving sex. |
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ace_of_spades
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| Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 1:55 am Post subject: |
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| Wouldn't use it directly on a girl, but should work wonders if you're telling it to the guys in the set. And dont say 'girlfriend... erm, ex', just say ex. Mention that you too have a high sex drive ('Im not gonna apologise for that'). Real good job there! |
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beyondevil
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| Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 5:36 am Post subject: |
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I am not at the stage to deal with male/female sets.
Right now I am trying to open 1-2 sets. So I need to come up with a DHV story that would work well. Do you have any examples that you use?
How is this one:
Oh that reminds me I have something crazy to tell you. I was in Indonesia for a gig with some other bands last year and after the concert we were all relaxing backstage. All of a sudden one of the band managers appears with this guy who resembles a geisha, he had foundation, eyeliner the works. I thought he was some crazy fan, but he introduced himself as an illusionist and a master in telekinetics. I have done my research when it comes to illusions and I was very sceptical. Anyways, he got my drummer to lay down on the floor and 3 of us sat by him. Did you ever play the light as a feather game when you were young? We pretty much played the same game, my Indonesian isn’t that great so I didn’t exactly understand what he was saying. We each placed one finger under our drummer and low and behold he levitated. Ever since then I have this obsession with exploring the power of the mind. Do you think its real or was it just an illusion? |
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beyondevil
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| bump input please |
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I think it´s a quite nice story, but to be honest it is gonna sound like a lie.
DHVs shouldn´t be about superthinks that has happened to you, that you know the girl has not experienced herself. It should be something that might have happened to her too, so that she can be able to take the story more personally.
Other than that I must say that I think you have a good flow with your writings. I love it when people make their own material. |
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beyondevil
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| Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 12:50 am Post subject: |
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| I get it. Its not exactly a lie but a mixture of different nights forced into one. |
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