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PostPosted: Thu Jan 19, 2017 12:15 am 
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Text game question. Trying to banter to reestablish rapport with an ex here. (Sorry if this is the wrong place for that question, but it appears to be where text game issues are being discussed.)

From: R [me]
2017-01-14 13:14 GMT-08:00
[image of car featuring innumerable Jesus stickers]
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From: R
Sat, Jan 14, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Wow.
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From: X
Sun, Jan 15, 2017 at 3:07 PM
That is crazy. Went to a satanic mass last night. It was fun!
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From: R
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 1:05 AM
Actually sounds pretty intriguing. Was [local occultist] involved?
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From: R
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 1:06 AM
And now you've got me intrigued with the fotay into the graveyard.
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From: X
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 9:29 AM
No, Brian wasn't involved. The graveyard comment came out of nowhere - I haven't been to one recently, thank goodness
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From: R
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 10:14 AM
Thank goodness? I bet you'd make a spontaneous graveyard adventure a total blast. There must be all sorts of cool ones in LA.
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From: X
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 10:21 AM
Thank goodness because no one I know has died recently
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From: R
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 10:29 AM
That
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From: R
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 10:29 AM
definitely good news.
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From: R
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 10:29 AM
I was just thinking about things like graveyard film series.
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From: R
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 10:30 AM
Or entirely unstructured outings. Imagining you in an all black outfit with those fiery locks. Scaring away the vampires. Or partying with them.
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From: X
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Ha!
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From: R
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 10:39 AM
Maybe with a big silver cross, displayed commandingly. "Here I am, creatures of the night! If you don't want a stake through the heart, show me what you've got! The faintest taste of me has been known to drive your kind delirious . . . ."
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From: X
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 10:42 AM
Sounds like me at age 17
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From: R
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 10:57 AM
Dunno. At 43 you might still be able to get *some* vampires going.
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From: R
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 10:57 AM
The flaming hair thing goes a long way with the undead.
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From: X
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 11:00 AM
I'm still working my way through the living
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From: R
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 11:29 AM
There's something to be said for the living. I mean, vamps may be too jaded--just interested in going straight for a sip of ambrosia from your awesome neck. While the living might want to relish the playful way you dance with words, or listen to you sing in B-flat.
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From: X
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 12:26 PM
Exactly

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Trying for some push-pull here—not sure how successfully. E.g., she might wonder whether it’s a compliment to talk about her singing in B-flat. Ditto for the bit about attracting vamps at 43. Mixed with compliments, obviously.

My final line here was maybe too heavy and not playful enough? I liked flipping things a little, though: seemed as if she was reminding me that she was seeing other people—the living; but I think my reply in effect equated the vamps with the guys she’s seeing and the living with me.


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PostPosted: Thu Jan 19, 2017 3:49 am 
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So fucking try hard. On and on and on about graveyards and vamps.

A dominant male doesn't have time for this shit...to be a woman's text court jester. That's how you look.

R: Let's catch up tomorrow night at Bar X.


Edit: I went over this again. The part about spontaneous graveyard adventures is so absurd, lol. It reads like you are speaking to a queen as you bow before her. My god, man.

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From: R [me]
2017-01-14 13:14 GMT-08:00
[image of car featuring innumerable Jesus stickers]
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From: R
Sat, Jan 14, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Wow.
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From: X
Sun, Jan 15, 2017 at 3:07 PM
That is crazy. Went to a satanic mass last night. It was fun!
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From: R
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 1:05 AM
Actually sounds pretty intriguing. So does seeing that ass again. You should come over.

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I didn't read the exchange when I first posted.

Lmao.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 19, 2017 10:04 pm 
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Heywood Jablowme wrote:
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From: R [me]
2017-01-14 13:14 GMT-08:00
[image of car featuring innumerable Jesus stickers]
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From: R
Sat, Jan 14, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Wow.
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From: X
Sun, Jan 15, 2017 at 3:07 PM
That is crazy. Went to a satanic mass last night. It was fun!
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From: R
Tue, Jan 17, 2017 at 1:05 AM
Actually sounds pretty intriguing. So does seeing that ass again. You should come over.



haha awesome! dominant as fuck and totally honest. You're respecting your time, and hers. And a welcome relief from the ridiculous graveyard talk.

Whether she comes over or not, this is a win either way. Not giving a shit about outcomes and using shocking honesty and charm is cat nip for women, because it comes from an abundance mentality.

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